噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-18 22:13

我女儿写的英语故事集

本帖最后由 噢呦呦 于 2019-3-7 22:28 编辑

我女儿要写英语故事集

我慢慢把她写过的英语故事更新上来
这是其中一个
1. At the library
Once upon a time, there were a boy and a girl. One day, they went to the library. The girl said ”I want a history book.” So the boy took one book on the shelf. The boy said “Is this book?” The girl nodded and said “No.” The girl said “I wanted a history one, but you got me a farm one.” The boy said “You should get me a comic.” The girl nodded. Then they went back to their house. On the road, they met a man. He stole their comic. So the boy and the girl worked together to beat him. And they won. (They were twins.) The end.

2. The happy field (part one)
**** Hidden Message *****
3. Lissy and Lia (part one)
**** Hidden Message *****
4. Why did the tree worry?
**** Hidden Message *****
5. That’s not a good day!
**** Hidden Message *****
6. An amazing day
**** Hidden Message *****

angolee 发表于 2018-11-18 23:05

沙发,手动点赞:lol

不明真相de群众 发表于 2018-11-18 23:18

厉害,牛的很

窗边的喵喵桑 发表于 2018-11-18 23:56

收藏,以后读给娃听,这是小姐姐写的故事集

qiqi妈 发表于 2018-11-19 06:06

想知道几年级啊?

Scottie 发表于 2018-11-19 06:38

厉害的牛蛙啊

大公鸡喔喔叫 发表于 2018-11-19 06:38

必须点赞,写的真好!

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-19 07:09

qiqi妈 发表于 2018-11-19 06:06 static/image/common/back.gif
想知道几年级啊?

小学一年级

mWdc3uvcHN 发表于 2018-11-19 07:41

厉害了,一年级大神级别

罗森 发表于 2018-11-19 07:48

很好啊……

lllb 发表于 2018-11-19 08:04

哈哈哈哈哈哈太可爱了

ztewahaha 发表于 2018-11-19 08:14

厉害厉害厉害,都会用英文写故事了

buddycao10 发表于 2018-11-19 08:15

强的         

allenpro 发表于 2018-11-19 08:18

好厉害的娃啊

冒牙牙 发表于 2018-11-19 08:37

厉害的娃,有趣的故事

Ampshfrank 发表于 2018-11-19 08:51

厉害的娃,膜拜

云端幽兰 发表于 2018-11-19 08:53

棒棒哒,必须赞

我爱唐诗三百 发表于 2018-11-19 09:09

进来点赞。

qiqijulie 发表于 2018-11-19 10:40

厉害 一年级牛娃

wuyou 发表于 2018-11-19 10:45

厉害啊~ 才一年级~

陈芊妤 发表于 2018-11-19 12:11

写的很有趣,英文语法也用的很正确,棒棒哒

Jason嘉妈 发表于 2018-11-19 13:06

太厉害了 请问平时怎么学习英语的

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-19 13:53

Jason嘉妈 发表于 2018-11-19 13:06 static/image/common/back.gif
太厉害了 请问平时怎么学习英语的

http://www.qianfanedu.cn/thread-120970-1-1.html
这是我写的一篇关于怎么启蒙英语的文章

香香妈妈 发表于 2018-11-19 15:24

牛娃牛娃,这个必须点赞

木樨 发表于 2018-11-19 16:13

厉害啊,牛蛙!

可乐丹丹 发表于 2018-11-19 17:04

一年级大神,膜拜一下

jayyoung0209 发表于 2018-11-19 17:26

很厉害的,词汇量很大了啊

一湖水 发表于 2018-11-20 18:14

太厉害了,

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-20 18:29

本帖最后由 噢呦呦 于 2018-11-20 18:30 编辑

The happy field (part one)
Once upon a time, in the happy field there were many silly things, such as fox acting like a person, mangos that can walk and so on. So happy field was really silly. But its neighbor the Dabring kingdom was not fun. Why was not the Dabring fun at all? Because every clown couldn’t imagine fun play. And the jokers couldn’t tell the joke. Why? Because all the jokes in happy field had all told yet! But, one day happy field clowns taught Dabring clowns more silly plays. The end.
Part two
And the happy jokers told more joke. So they taught them more fun jokes. And now the Dabring was filled with laughing. And now it was called the big happy field. The end.

the Dabring是我女儿自己想的地名。
错了好几个单词和语法,有些地方都不知道她想表达什么,后来问她才改过来。

kellybobo01 发表于 2018-11-21 14:49

太厉害了 才一年级

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-22 21:54

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Lissy and Lia (part one)
One upon a time, there was Lissy and Lia. They were partners. They were friends and they loved each other. And they were in the same school, they did everything together. One day because mother and father’s one thing, so Lissy and mother were still in China, but Lia and father were in Japan. Lissy still remembered Lia, but Lia had a new friend, Tommy. The end.
Part two
Tommy was so friendly that Lia had almost forgot Lissy. Now her friend was Tommy instead of Lissy. And she loved her new partner. They did thing together just like the time she was with her old sister. But, they were not in the same school. And Lissy had a new friend too! Lissy’s new friend was Peter. Peter was kind and helpful. But she still remembered Lia. One day, Lissy phoned Lia, and Lia now remembered Lissy. The end.

Lucylulu0310 发表于 2018-11-22 22:27

手动点赞

wen晓dy 发表于 2018-11-23 08:52

赞啊超牛+10086

蒲公英200606 发表于 2018-11-23 09:00

厉害~~~~~

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-11-27 20:41

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Why did the tree worry?
Once upon a time, there was an old tree. And one day, it was fall. The old tree thought, “ I must tell the animals now it is fall.” So he told the wind’s god to send the notes. When the wind god reached squirrel’s home. Squirrel said “ I will find more nuts.” Then, the wind god arrived bear’s den. The bear said “ I will go to bed soon.” Next, the wind god went to mother’s hut. The mom said “I will make more coats for me and my daughter.” The end.

噢呦呦 发表于 2018-12-2 10:42

That’s not a good day!
11.30
Once upon a time, there was a family. One day, they planned to camp. They found things. Mon searched for her wallet. Dad searched for his pen. Grandpa searched for his mittens. Nand searched for her doll. Grandma searched for her foods. When they had done, it was afternoon. And when they arrived, it was evening. They built a tent and ate foods. At last mom said “ Today is not good at all!” The end.

龟小姐 发表于 2019-1-31 11:10

厉害~你家小时候启蒙报的什么机构啊

甘竹_DWTWs 发表于 2019-1-31 11:36

牛蛙,厉害:)

噢呦呦 发表于 2019-2-2 20:00

龟小姐 发表于 2019-1-31 11:10 static/image/common/back.gif
厉害~你家小时候启蒙报的什么机构啊

贝乐
字数

雪梨雪力 发表于 2019-2-12 22:27

超越小学生

正瓜 发表于 2019-2-12 22:50

厉害啊点赞

tiantian169169 发表于 2019-2-14 10:17

牛娃牛妈,赞赞赞

卢克_万 发表于 2019-2-14 10:36

很厉害哦 赞

卷毛梨涡胖芯妈 发表于 2019-2-14 11:16

一年级,超级牛蛙了额!

噢呦呦 发表于 2019-3-7 22:07

本帖最后由 噢呦呦 于 2019-3-7 22:29 编辑

An amazing day
I woke up one morning and everything was different! None of my families were at home. I tried to find my mom and dad, but I couldn’t. Suddenly, I heard someone was whispering to the other. I didn’t find anything until I heard an important thing! One voice heard as if a man was talking. He said “Un-oh that child would be upset. I made her family disappear. Sorry! I had practiced it for months and years. But I still had mistakes. I try to give her gifts, but I take her family away.” So, I walked in that room. I asked that man ”Are you Harry Potter?” “I am” said the man “I want to be your friend.” I said ”OK, I can be your friend, and can you take my family back?” He said “Yes, but not now.” Harry Potter talked with me. Then he disappeared. And my family appeared. I told them but they did not believe. The End.





木木三 发表于 2019-4-25 10:26

太牛了,上外附小的牛娃水平!!膜拜一下,楼主能不能分享下培养英语的帖子

噢呦呦 发表于 2019-5-5 12:03

木木三 发表于 2019-4-25 10:26
太牛了,上外附小的牛娃水平!!膜拜一下,楼主能不能分享下培养英语的帖子

以前写过的分享我家英语启蒙经验 http://www.qianfanedu.cn/thread-120970-1-1.html

become 发表于 2019-5-5 12:25

牛娃,好厉害啊!

雪梨雪力 发表于 2019-9-23 13:20

看了楼主的英语启蒙贴,我都想哭了。
楼主家宝宝起床可以看小1,2小时书
我家………一天加起来都没有
坐不住…别说认字了

波比麻麻nj 发表于 2019-9-23 15:17

别人家的牛蛙
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